Fuzzarelly, of the blog with the same name, heard my cries for help and proof read my story ‘The Gravedigger.’
She sent me a paragraph by paragraph run down of the story and I had fun seeing my story through someone else’s eyes.
I have been busy rewriting the story and I will putting it up on ‘Thrill and Shiver’ when it is done.
Thanks also to Dorlana of Supernatural Fairy Tales. She said I needed some dialog.
Thank you to the other people who have commented on this and my other stories. It is always good to get feedback.